Learning from my faults, I evolve, I move forward, Unlocking prospects! Breaking free of servitude, It's me against the world now!
This post is written in response to OctPoWriMo Challenge – where you’ll write a “POEM” everyday for 31 days, using the prompt word. Follow this link to learn more about it, see other submissions, and to share your own. Come and join in the fun folks!
Day 24 word prompt is “OPENING!”
Suggested Form – Freedom to choose what you like.
I yet again aimed at writing a TANKA to challenge myself to fit in “my concepts of an opening” in just 5 lines and 31 syllables. Hope I did justice!
As always any feedback and advise is more than appreciated!
Love,
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Making a negative into a positive. This creates good vibes.
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Love it! Perfect with the picture! 💕
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Great poem, but hey, some of the world are with you 🙏😀
Aww.. I know, I know.. 🙂
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YES!!!
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Can’t help feeling the same at times, great text ! 😊
#storyOfOurLives
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Wow. Powerful writing ❤️❤️
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My pleasure
unlocking prospects is most definitely opening yourself to new beginnings – well done!
Yes, indeed! Thank you so much Gina!❤
Thats a powerful shot with words so perfect👍🏻👌🏻
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Oh, yes! Beautifully written!
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Loving this! Its from our faults that we learn and grow.
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You’re welcome Richa! 💜
Wonderfully written, inspiring verse.🙏❤
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I loved it! Great take on the prompt again, dear! ❤️
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Powerful 👍
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Most welcome
WordPress was your opening, the opening of your heart. Your heart is learning, evolving; forward thinking is the direction. You’ve unlocked your true potential, hello world; meet someone worth knowing! Be blessed!
Thank you so much for your constant support and motivation Warren! It really really means a lot to me!❤
You so wonderfully captured my evolution! 🙂
A friend take the time to not just hear, but listen as the heart speaks! Be blessed! 😊😎
Yes, you indeed are a true friend in all its sense!🙏❤
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Powerful words!! Loved it! ❤️
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Powerful writing 🤘🤘
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Great 🙂
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Be the free soul you want to see in the world!
Without a doubt! 🙂
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Good for you! 👍 Go for it!
Nice Tanka also!
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Love it💕🎉
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“Me against the world”, that sounds very liberating.
Free to soar high and be whoever you want to be ❤️
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YESSSSS! We shall and we will!👍
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Oooo this world better watch out coz we coming 😎
That’s right.. learning from our faults makes us even stronger better and careful…
YES, absolutely! 🙂
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Nice
Thanks sweetie! 🙂
The world better watch out, ’cause it’s about to be cut down to size…
Hahaha.. It better does learn to behave! 😉
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Oh it’ll learn, alright… it’ll learn or it’ll burn!
Hahaha.. Absolutely! 🙂
I feel I have to save this words and read daily. Thanks for sharing.
I’m so glad this post resonated with you.. Thank you so much sweetie!❤
power, strength and everything
wow
Indeed! #letNoOneDullYourShine
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Embracing your oneness with the universe, I love it!😊❤️
Aww.. Thanks a bunch sweetheart!😘
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Nice share Richa, have a great day ☕
Thank you so much! You too.. 😊
You’re most welcome!
Great read, it truly is, us against the world.
I have nominated you for this tag … 🙂
https://momlifewithchiari.com/2018/10/25/dear-15-year-old-me-tag/
-Ana
Aww.. Thank you so so much! Will surely participate once I’m done with the #octPoWriMo Challenge!❤
Fantastic !
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And free, great lines
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You are gorgeous!
Aww.. Thank you so much! And so are YOU!❤
Amazing powerful write! Loved it friend!
Thanks much! 🙂
Everything about this piece feels freeing – exhilarating, even. Thanks for that!
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Powerful poem. Well penned. 👏👍👍
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Very good read, I enjoyed it.
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Beautiful.