POETRY

Music Saved My Life

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With my head up in the clouds,
Jiving to music so loud.

Pirouetting the night away,
I jump, I dance; my hips I sway.

Absorbed in this melody called love,
Forgetting my worries, I rise up.

Euphoric vibes, ecstatic ambiance,
Thumping beats, roaring quakes and no silence.

There is magic in the way you make me feel,
Oh music! My muse, my world, my answer, my tranquil!

This post is written in response to OctPoWriMo Challenge – where you’ll write a “POEM” everyday for 31 days, using the prompt word. Follow this link to learn more about it, see other submissions, and to share your own. Come and join in the fun folks!

Day 10 word prompt is “DANCING ON AIR!”

Suggested Form – Converse.

The Con-Verse, created by Connie Marcum Wong, consists of three or more 2-line rhyming stanzas (couplets). The meter of this form is in syllabic verse.
Rhyme scheme: aa,bb,cc,dd,ee and Meter: 7,7,8,8,9,9,10,10,11,11
This form consists of three or more couplets which ascend by one syllable up to and until you reach a syllabic count of eleven which would contain ten lines.
This process may be repeated for a longer verse. If repeated, you must begin your first couplet with the syllabic count of seven again and continue from there.

As always any feedback and advise is more than appreciated!

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  7. You’re blocking others view. 🤔 Don’t worry, it’s obvious they don’t feel the music. They don’t want to rise up, and sway their hips. Enjoy your muse, forget about your troubles. Let them view how to be tranquil, dance the night away! 😊

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  21. Such a well thought out poem. I have already been exposed to so many more styles and rules in the past 11 days then I can remember. As for the actual poem, well let’s just say that nowadays if I did any of the things I use to do when I am letting go to the music, the tranquility would come from the pain meds I was taking for my dislocated hip, and the torn acl. 😛😂💕 11 for 11

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