POETRY

Freedom From Samsara

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Baring it out for all to see,
She was an open booklet,
With a life so uncomplicated and free,
She seemed like a "picture-perfect" portrait,

With no mysteries and no dark secrets to hide,
She breezed her way through a satisfied life,
Riding with presence and poise the continuous animate tides,
She lived, she persisted, she thrived,

Fighting her battles and inner demons,
She'd discovered a whole new identity,
She'd risen to believe in Gods and Heavens, 
She progressed, trusting in humanity and generosity,

Her story is stirring - of introspection, rumination and valor,
Breaking free of infinite ciphers, she emerged as a SURVIVOR!

This post is written in response to OctPoWriMo Challenge – where you’ll write a “POEM” everyday for 31 days, using the prompt word. Follow this link to learn more about it, see other submissions, and to share your own. Come and join in the fun folks!

Day 26 word prompt is “INSIDE OUT!”

Suggested Form – Sonnet.

Keeping in mind the “festivities” that are over burdening my creativity – here’s my “adapted” version of a Sonnet. Even though I’ve taken care of the 14 line pattern and the a,b,a,b,c,d,c,d,e,f,e,f,g,g rhyming blueprint, my syllable count is a little off track. Ah, when life happens and you have so much to do in such a little time, you gotta do what you gotta do!

As always any feedback and advise is more than appreciated!

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    1. Thanks a bunch hunnie!❤

      We all have it in us to be a better version of ourselves, than yesterday.. Keep the faith and keep walking! You are MORE than what you think you really are! Love!❤

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